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    Default Troubled

    Used the past SOTW stock for some inspiration.
    What you guys think?







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    I like it a lot, nice c4d placement and lighting and excellent depth, however..... that text is destroying it for me. ITS SO GIGANTIC, HOLY CRAP. I like the font and coloring, just... you know... size it down.... It's a challenge to even take my eyes off of it.

    Oh and maybe add in a gradient map to color code it a bit more.

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    I agree whole heartedly. Too much text. AAAAAAHHH. Really distracts from the focal. Overall though, it's a nice piece, slightly lacking in depth, but solid. Fix the text and you're golden





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    Text scares me, but the rest is cool.
    Liking the colours, they are nice, and the placement of your C4D's is epic, as always.
    Sticking a gradient map on there would help bring everything onto one tone, more or less, and sizing down the text would be good.
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    first of all, this is huge. Why so big? its much easier to fill up a sig with effects if its smaller.

    Secondly that text is HUGE. make it smaller heres no need for it to be like 72 px.

    I liek the effectc 4d but the red line shave no point in being in there and rly dont work. IMo get rid of them.

    TBH i think this sig is mostly a WIP. I dont see a lot done to it except for adding more c4d's, and even then those aren't rly blended so hotly. Overall i think you should work on ti a bit more to make it rly go with the c4ds.


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    its lush i like the biggness i lovveeeeeeeee itttt



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