Rise

[Desire]

Signature titled Rise - Basically aspiring for something I Guess ._.

I have 2 versions because i was a little iffy about the text

V1


V2


CnC Please ^__^

[tekken]

for me it looks like 2 different pieces joined to gether,
the render part and the c4d area (the left),
this totally kills the flow for me,
the blue dot you have isnt a good idea
because it ruins the focal and
it rather seems kinda LQ and the text isnt so
great, llok at some depth, flow tuts and
you can make it better.

[Popje]

texs does really suck and what tekken said ^^

[Papa]

100% agreed with tekken. This is two different sigs just blended together at the render.
The text needs a lot of work, and the transition from the right side to the left needs work, that white stuff isn't he;ping it a ton.
IMO im not a fan of the circles/spirals in the BG so i would tyr to get rid of that.

Overall i think it needs mroe unity. I dunno how to fix it, it's one of those ones that just doesnt matchup.

[Desire]

Ok thanks for those comments, they will help me.

[Immortal.]

yes i agree with what was sed before.
no.1 i dont think the text is done as well as it can.
sorta squishy i tink.
moving on, what they sed about unity is true, ur both sides dont match much...its ok tho...keep at it.
try again bro