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[eagles16]

v2
inspiration and some help - Papa's beauty sig

[Papa]

The border is really obtrussive. It bothers me quite a bit. I can tell it's a curved border but i dont understand why the corners are like cut in. It doesn't look right. IMO whenever you do a border it should be purly black or white. But i'm really not a fan of borders tbh.

The thing behind her head is a bit bright. I'd liek to see it made a bit smaller but it's not a big deal.

The background is cool i like the way it flows and it blends in well. It needs more contrast though. I'm pretty positive you were doing that on purpose but i still think it's too obtrussive. You need to make it more subtle.

The etxt is beautiful. If somebody ever says you don't knwo text show them this sig and proove them wrong.
I dislike the scan lines though. They are spaced out way too much and seem abit distracting.


Overall V2 is cool, but i still think it needs mroe contrast.

[eagles16]

yeah the border got really messed up :/

more contrast !? lol, i'll do a v3 later.

yeah i thought i finally got the text.

i like the text better in v1