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[eagles16]

[Aces High]

"Oooooh!" That's exactly the sound I made when I saw this. It's really simple, but well executed. Is this a stock or a render? Nice depth either way. I'm not really a fan of the text, I think it should be more subtle and cosmopolitan for this piece. Outside of that, nice work.

[eagles16]

render + stock = ooooooooooooh!

[Ptka]

It's really nice.
Simple but the design is good.
Awesome flow and I can see the action without there being action, it's very subtle.
You fell apart on the text, it's WAY too modern and fun for this serious piece.
Cosmopolitan would be good as Aces said because of the cityscape in the background. :P

[eagles16]

k posting up v2

[Ptka]

Text still seems a bit off, it actually looks a bit pixelated, do you have it italicized?
Just keep playing around, this font is better than the first but not quite, maybe decrease the opacity?
Try a handwritten font so that it flows with the rest?
I'm grasping at straws, never been great at text myself.

[eagles16]

yeah, most of my sigs go with the modern tecxt so this is tough for me

[Fork]

Simple but nice, you could have thrown in some c4d work or a little clip art to spruce it up.

[eagles16]

yeah but fork; this sig is enough with what it has if i added clip mask it would ruin the simplistic beauty