Remix Master

[Jonny2448]

[Papa]

FHS!! lol you have a sever case of cloating head syndrome. Get rid of some of the effects at the bottom that way it doesn't look like his head is coming out of nowhere. I like the text you did a good job on that.

WHats with the compo? Smack in the middle liek that is just uninteresting. Move him over to the side it'd be much better.

WHy is it white around his head? Is it because you didn't bother to cut him out of the stock he was in? NOt good, i dislike the sloppyness. Pretty easy to tell what you did.

Overall the sig is okay but IMO looks like your half assing it.

[Jonny2448]

WHy is it white around his head? Is it because you didn't bother to cut him out of the stock he was in? NOt good, i dislike the sloppyness. Pretty easy to tell what you did. .

You are 100% correct.

[Ptka]

I like your made up disease Papa, FHS.
Yeah I completely agree, it looks alright, a bit sloppy but it has some good elements.
I like the text, but the other colours aren't that pretty.
Keep working on it, and do what Papa says with the floating heads. :P

[Jonny2448]

Hows that one?

[Ptka]

I like that one too, the colour is good.
I don't really like whatever that texture is all over it, kind of throws it off.
It's a bit busy well, the effects almost override the render.
The right side is a bit dark maybe add a small light source over there.
Don't like the text, it's a bit too big, at least the top one is, I like the bottom text.
Good job, keep working on it.

[Jonny2448]

I was trying to make the render my 3rd Focal point.

I was going for Lower middle to text then across the render. so you see the whole sig. And the text I was thinking the same but I like how the A in AH works with the lower text

[Jonny2448]

Changed font size and added some lighting and Gradient maps

[Papa]

v2 is better by far, but why your 3rd focal? Your render or stock should ALWAYs be your FIRST focal. IT's like your eating a sandwhich. You don't want to eat everything one at a time. What your saying is you dont want to eat the whole sandwhich all together. So you'd have to eat the bread and then the cheese and then finally you'd get to the ham or turkey or whatever u want.

Well who like that? ANy good sandwhich eater knows its all about the meat. AKA your render. When you eat it all together u get the whole thing. It's only natural you focus on your focal, because it is what unites the entire sig. You did make the rest of the sig to match the render, right?

lol analogies ftw. And FHS is not made up. Well it is ibut i didnt make it up it's for realz.

BTW for seperate tags you should make seperate threads, unless you have like 5 tigs your gonna show all at one time and then u just use one thread.

[Jonny2448]

I am a vegetarian.. lol jk

Where do you get all these analogies