Devil's Roar

[zole]

Hey got bored so i tried a new tag alot of this is jsut smudging so hope you enjoy

V1:


V2:


C&C and tell me which one you prefere

Thanks
Dan.

[Fork]

It looks over sharpened and not liking the topazish look.

V2 is better.

Text is good.

[Ptka]

I like the second version better.
Nice text and the lighting is cool.
Simple and good shading, but as Fork said it's a bit over-sharpened.

[Papa]

oversharpned most definelt,y possibly topazed or wayy to much highpass. EIther way i dislike seeing a halo around your render.

Zole when you are smudging it's just like any other styly you need detail. So start out with thte big brushe..yeah. But then move down and down and down until you get to like 5 px. That way you get detail. Variation is the key to smudging otherwise you get a boring mess of on vaguely similar color spread throughout the sig.

WHich is what i see here. you really didnt bother to add detail to your smuding.

Text is nice though i'd prefer the ROAR to be smaller.