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  1. #1
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    Default Where to go from here?

    Alright, here is my plight. I took a standard Spiderman render, hoping to spice it up a bit. I did that, at least a little bit, but I am clueless as to where to go from here.

    Any ratings, and helpful comments and tips are appreciated!


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    did you put that text on there as a watermark or did you put that text on there because you thought itd make nice text. Cause i gotta be honest nobody would rip a WIP. so you dont rly have to worry about that.

    Secondly i like your smudging the efects and the detail u have in that is nice.
    Howver unsmudge his head, you dont wang the top of his head flying off that just looks silly.

    One of your problems is that it's black and white. IMO color sigs are more interesting and if you have a choice undo the black and white.

    To go from here..What i'd do.. is i'd work coupla effect c4d renders in there. Set them to linear dodge and then erase most of the parts you dislike. If you work them in correctly and then blur some parts that look like they should be (for depth) it migh help you. Also adding some nice text might work.
    Add some text in the font Homorahkan or however u spell it, it's the spiderman font.


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  3. #3
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    i know you intended this to be like a discussion of what to do better but since there is an actual ig we are talking about it belong in sigs and avy's.


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    RATCHET is my bitch
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    u ever stolen a bible?
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    Andrew says:
    wow
    thats fucking hard core
    ^^HAHAHA, dm sucks XD


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