Assassin's Creed Signature

[Mustafa]

An Assassin's Creed sig that I made for a friend on another forum. May I have some C&C please?

[LoganGFX]

I like it, except the green is too overpowering. It just makes it a bit hard to even worry about the rest. Tone it down, maybe? The BG and effects look fine, best I can see anyway.

[Papa]

Realy pretty good but the green is amazingly unnessescary. Good smudgign and depth. Just drop the green or lower it's opacity and then make the text normal.
get it out of the corner peharps to the right of the render and then make it smaller.

[Mustafa]

Thanks guys. I tried changing it with the advice that you gave:

[Immortal.]

i really like ur v1 except that the big lightsource spot in the middle is sorta strong.
the smudging is sweet man real nice.
text i think flows well
nice work.
nice way to jump on the scene

[Papa]

Thanks guys. I tried changing it with the advice that you gave:

good job with fixing the text though it still needs to be smaller and sccoted down about 5 pixels and then left so it overlaps the render.

Then also..I liked the blue! i kept it from being monotone. We were just saying drop the bright birght light source over the render, not the blue coloring on the side.

[KidBuu]

^^ totally agree, and if possible remove the green photo filter. or gradient map whatever u have used ormaybe the color balance

[Hauyser]

Love the smudging effects, the text/monotone style is not so flash. Try experimenting with the lighting.