Rate My first independent sig

[Acrobe]

rate and tell me what i can change pliz its my first one i did with no help and only my own ideas.

[KidBuu]

ok, lets say u tried to cr8 a flow but the render dint blend it so it just looks like u pasted the render. The text is yucky, maybe adding some style to it will do the trick.
well if its ur first independent sig good try. But u still needto learn. I m still learning, so need tuts sometimes, it teaches u new things. i say make some sigs with the help of tuts and then start independently only after u know that now there cannot be any fault.