The Sword

[KidBuu]

Tried a vertical sig. First ever vertical C&C plox

[Immortal.]

sorta large
but yeah.
the effects on the bottom are real tight imo
overall a well done job.
keep it up

[KidBuu]

Gee i m improving

[Firescorpio]

i see quite an improvement here buu, toned down on the effects, which on your previous work where going overboard some of the shapes are a bit too burned, and the transition of blues is harshly done takes a bit away from the sig.

as for the depth it has little to no depth, effects are pretty good, the sort od distortion/blur on the left side of the sig throws it off for me, effects are not completely blend in, so nearing the edge of the sword they start looking choppy, try developing without smudging so much, a definite improvement but still need work.

as for the text, its ok but the calibur4 looks way to crammed together to the edge of the sig. try arranging that. overall its a decent sig buu keep trying you are getting there

[KidBuu]

hmm, less smudge u say. Ok! i wil ldo it thanks