some what disagree bones well idea is good but imo some blending is needed
the erasing thing isnt doing the trick and the render is looking pretty like its being avoided and the focalpoint is that street stock.
The text is sad impossible to read, in fact i m trying to read for last 5 mins but dont know whats written there.
try working on the above lines and try to add a light source.
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I have to agree with buu on this one very good idea but not there yet
the render almost seems like its just placed there not much blending on it or and effects on it.
The text needs a lot of work like buu said you cant read it at all took me like a min or 2 just to get it
yeah im with buu. First off, i liek the compo. I'd prefer him to be moved in a bit more but it'snot bad. Second. I would like to see a bit more blending but not too much more.
The quality on that BG is HORRIBLE. wherever you got that stock..is not good. I casn see individual pixels on that stock. Definetly try to unshrpen it or something, cause it needs work.
the text color, the font doesnt help being able to read it but bump uop the text color make it brighter sowe cans ee it.
Overall its decent but rly doesnt have that WOW factor.
thannx for all the feedback guys. this will really help me a lot. as you can see i just started with this graphic stuff. so ima need as much advice as i can get.
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