Charge!!

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Newest, and as always feedback is welcome'd!

[Newton]

very good the only thing is that its hard to read the red text

[Papa]

text is horrid. I'd drop it or pick somethign else. the color/opacity is killing it.

Also why is the compo so off? Move the render to one side or the other.
this sig is pretty cool a bit boring though, and i don't see a ton of blending, even though i think it's all one stock, you still need it.

not bad.

[Miril]

Not bad, the flags make it a bit dull.. it seems like the same effect repeated again and again and again and again and againnnnn
Text is ehh, change color/placement
lighting is off, seems like its coming from every which way
and like papa said compo = smack dab in the middlez, though i dont mind that as much :P

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text is horrid. I'd drop it or pick somethign else. the color/opacity is killing it.

Also why is the compo so off? Move the render to one side or the other.
this sig is pretty cool a bit boring though, and i don't see a ton of blending, even though i think it's all one stock, you still need it.

not bad.

Yeah it is one stock, is it really bad? I mean bad as in if i use a stock for an entire signature?

[Miril]

its not bad to use a stock for an entire sig, what he means is (i think, im not papa, in case you didn't know) you still need to blend your focal, as in smudge/erase(if possible)/blur/overall BLEND with c4d's or other effects as you would in a sig with a normal render. for instance, the smudgish thing coming out of the B in the text and covering part of your focal is a form of blending the focal, though not the most subtle form of it. subtle is better in some places.

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Ok, yeah whenever i use stocks i always smudge. Cause i dont want people to think i just found a stock and slapped my name on it. I added c4d, tried to blend and so forth. Original stock here ::

http://www.gamewallpapers.com/wallpa...7;3A+Total+War