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    Default My coursework - 'The End Of London'

    This is my first thing I have made with Photoshop that's not a signature or anything, Sorry about the watermarks, You won't know how serious my teacher is about taking things from the internet and claiming them as your own..

    Once, I made a magazine cover, And uploaded it to the internet, And he found it and said I stole it..

    So, This is a made up film idea.

    So.. Just being safe.




    Comments and suggestions please.

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    This was the image used.

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    It looks really good until you scroll down and see the text.
    What even is it about? I mean if it's a piece of Graphic Design coursework - does it even need text?

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    Oh, Hey Mat.
    Um, It's sort of a Theatrical Movie poster.

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    err why is there a tornado in between when its a scene of burning london
    but the effects are pretty slick
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    Thanks. Um.. Tornado.
    Well this is based in 2026 and it is the start of the Post Apocalyptic world.

    Basically, The tornado has resulted from climate change.

    Thanks.

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    beautiful effects, i wondered how you manipulated them mushroom clouds and incorporated them into the pictures, letdowns are text and the yellow lines where the building is the the centre slighlty to the right
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    nice work. i really like it. The only thing i would say is get rid of the white lines coming from the corners. That's the only thing i can say i dont like. GJ
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    Thanks.

    What can I do to improve the text?

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    actually i dont see anything wrong with thetext
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    i think the whit lines are part of the watermark ? i could be wrong.

    looks really good and realistic, i think it looks a lil over sharpened and i aint a big fan of the ash or snow. specailly like the explosions and how there blended in






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