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    Default Mario Sunshine

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    Nice work on the signature.To improve it, you could try and blend the render in some more as it just sticks out a bit too much. You should also try to fix some of the colors by blending in Mario's colors with those of the background or the other way round.
    The size of the sig could also use some work as you could try and cropping some of the left side out as the sig seems a bit blank there.
    Or you could try and add some more effects there. The depth in this is kinda nice.
    Also, I may be wrong but try to have the render or focal around 1/3 or 1/4 the size of the sig.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mustafa View Post
    Nice work on the signature.To improve it, you could try and blend the render in some more as it just sticks out a bit too much. You should also try to fix some of the colors by blending in Mario's colors with those of the background or the other way round.
    The size of the sig could also use some work as you could try and cropping some of the left side out as the sig seems a bit blank there.
    Or you could try and add some more effects there. The depth in this is kinda nice.
    Also, I may be wrong but try to have the render or focal around 1/3 or 1/4 the size of the sig.

    I agree with everything, exceptfor that last sentence is a bit big. I'd say the render should be more liek 1\4 - 1\6 anywhere in between there. Aside form that though i totally agree.

    The BG is okay but the vector c4d + the smudgnig is just getting killed. Drop on or they other but right now they arent working.

    Also nice dpeth but i think you should work on adding more effects to the BG before blurring.

    The etxt is okay but there is wayy to much text. Drop some. Right now the font is okay but i dislike the glow to it.

    not too bad overall.


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