GoW2 chainsaw battle

[Kaka11|LFC]

C&C?

[Heepsy]

At first i couldnt see the guys having the chainsaw battle, till i got closer to my screen.

The border doesnt match the signature and it diverts my eyes from the focal point.

The lighting from the chainsaws is good i really like that.

and nice choice of game GoW2 is an amazing game

~Heepsy

[Kaka11|LFC]

yea, i had to make them further away though if i wanted to get the chainsaws in

i'll try and improve on my borders for next time

thanks for the comments

[KidBuu]

lack of depth there
try burning around the saws for more attractions
remove the noise
and text is awful as well as border
But ur growing
i was the same a month ago XD
Keep it up

[catch.]

same thoughts as the comment above, it lacks some contrast. Use the dodge tool as well as the burn tool for lighting.

[Kaka11|LFC]

thanks for the feedback guys im sure this will help me improve