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    I'm excited for the movie. Through this together using techniques from your tutorials.

    CnC appreciated.




    edit: revision 2
    Last edited by Everr; 02-24-2009 at 03:03 AM.

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    Bump. Looking for feedback.

    Had lots of trouble creating circular flow with c4d's around the outside edge of the cards. Don't know how to improve it

    Also having trouble adding the space in the middle without taking away from the focal, looking for suggestions.

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    I would have to say lower the opacity of the center more it stands out way to much more than the render, love the text, other than that this is pretty good keep up the work

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    Quote Originally Posted by Everr View Post
    I'm excited for the movie. Through this together using techniques from your tutorials.

    CnC appreciated.




    edit: revision 2

    I like this well blended and good effects, the circular flow is there but pehaps not as prominent as it could be. The smokey feeling is great though. Text is decent too. Overall a nice sig but i can't help but feel its a bit crowded. It could of done with a bit more breathing room but its not a huge issue.


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    I love it dude, it's really good, love the effect and the blending. Nice job.

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    I think this could be a great sig if you just work on your focal. The problem with this focal is that it doesnt rly have a face and it's hard to locate a back of somebodies head.
    The effects r really pretty cool. And you have some nice depth going, its just a bit busy for such a weak focal.

    a bit brigth though, work on dulling down that center


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    Thanks for all the comments, I definitely know where I want to go with this now.

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