C4D sigs

[tekken]

hello, im a bit rusty but im trying to use c4d because i rarely use any i never know what to do with them, any advice would be welcome, thanks you.

most decent stuff i got:

[--J.O.N--]

to chaotic for me...

[catch.]

yeah i agree, the first one is far too cluttered and they both lack flow. Although i have to say.. love your bottom current, the sprite one.