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[iRoGeR]

Took some advice CnC

[Ptka]

Ah much better.
No more monotone!
It's much better in that aspect.
I like the text, however the background is a bit "random".
There is too much nothing. This is a cool stock that could be used with a good background.
Don't just place fractals and brushing all over it just looks bad.
The foreground is awesome and the text is cool. Just work on getting the background stock better.

[iRoGeR]

it was actually a render but i see what your saying thank you

[catch.]

yeah overall it looks pretty good but the render seems seperate from the bg and it isn't blended.. apart from that gj.

[Newton]

she needs to be blended into the background more.
i like the text.
nice background.
good render.
GJ overall