1st in awhile

[†john316†™]

hmm
i haven't made anything in awhile

thought i'd see what i could still do

enjoy



CnC please
leave feed back

[Ptka]

Nice effect coming off his shirt.
It's a little empty, there is some depth, but both sides are very blank.
Background seems a bit disjointed because it's different.
The lightning should be more impacting if you are going to use it.
The right side is the best, the left side is where it falls down.

[†john316†™]

thanks ptka

[Ptka]

No problem.
Also noticed that you didn't included text.
You should if you decide to rework this one.
A very simple text for this one, nothing too flashy.

[Garis]

whole sig didnt impresed me.
BG is boring/ sorry.
but I really like that effect how he is fading...
awesome there.

[iRoGeR]

Not much going on. But i love the effect coming off his shirt.Just a little plain but i like the tag

[catch.]

its good imo, i like the contrast but as ptka said the lightning effect needs to stand out more.. and i'm not sure about inculding text.. only if you think it suits it.

[ratchetnclank]

Chuck some text on the left to fill this empty tag

[†john316†™]

thanks all
i was going for a transition from depressing etc...
to a state of calm and space etc...


like a peace in the chaos
if that makes sense

thanks all for your CnC

[Ptka]

I do get what you mean with the fading from chaos to peace, but it wasn't very clear until you mentioned it.
Good idea, but you need to make the execution a bit clearer.