Killzone

[cC.Midway]

hihi

[atroxcaelum]

My only complaint is that you can barely see the text at the bottom.

[cC.Midway]

ok, do u know how i can fix it?

[atroxcaelum]

Try making it a lighter shade, or changing its position.

For example, kind of like your did with your Final Fantasy XIII signature, let it compliment the sig, but still have it a lighter shade so it's visible. The font also doesn't quite match... maybe it's me, though.

[ratchetnclank]

Text is teh suck. No fill with outer glow ftl.
The render has been way overtopazed too. The sig apart from that is ok, but only because the compo saves it, the lack of effects is disturbing :\

[DoubleForte]

"Your lack of faith is disturbing." Sorry, had to do it. Yeah, the text sucks hard, sorry to say.

[MarkPancake]

There's way too much of the render which covers up all your effects. If you actually did any at least :S

[SSSSK]

it just looks like youved used the render and done nothing to it excpet topaz and text

[Papa]

I must say it needs a bit more. The Over topazed look i've never been a fan of and tbh this doesnt rly do it any good.
The sig istlef is decent if we could see more of it though and less topaz it'd be fantastic.

text needs more work, maybe try a different font. A Calm font would be cool i think it'd be like calm before the storm type thing. i dont know. If you did it right.

Also i'd drop the outerglow looking thing. And make it a ligther shade.

Overall not bad though.