New. Meh

[havok140]

I still have not yet got the hang of it like i used to a year or so ago but here is a new one. Its meh imo and yea i know..... i hate my text worse than YOU do lol.

[Foamy.]

Ditch the text fosho. Like you said.
Otherwise, you're pretty good.
I'm not very good at text, so don't worry, we all have weaknesses ;p

[Miril]

Change the text placement and I think it would be good if you wanted to keep it - maybe somewhere by the back of his neck?
Nice work otherwise, only one thing: the lighting splotch above his head on the left side is off, the other blotch a little farther away on the right should be moved towards the left and above his head imo to fix the lighting :3