Gas Mask!

[Foamy.]

v1


v2


v3


v1 and v3 are the best imo.
Criticism is appreciated

[Fuzer]

i agree, v1 and 3 are the best for me, however those lines kill it for me

[trend]

to much open space on the left side and makes it look unfinished

also its like theres too much going on...its really vibrant on the right side and sharp looking and then as you move left it tapers off....maybe some well placed text would make the left side seem less empty.

[MarkPancake]

Omg where is that stock from! I want it god dammit. Anyways, nice job, I think V3 has more texture but V1 has a better background. Combine the background of 1 with 3 you got yourself a hot ass sig right there.

[Papa]

V1 V1.
The lighting on the middle left though is rly killing it. Check out the mask it's darkened right there, the light shouldnt be there.

Secondly i think you should flip this over. it'd be a bit more pleasing, especailyl keeping in mind people analyze sigs left to right like reading. It'd lead them into the sig more.

greta poetential.
Why dont you do text though? Seems to me a bit that you are trying to avoid it...Not saying that you can't do it, im just saying i want to see you add text to these.

[Foamy.]

I'M TERRIBLE AT TEXT.
It kills my them.
It sticks a knife in them and then shoots 3 9mm clips into the chest.

[Papa]

I'M TERRIBLE AT TEXT.
It kills my them.
It sticks a knife in them and then shoots 3 9mm clips into the chest.

then you should be using text to get better!! start out with default fonts sans seerif and the like.
I suggets reading my text tutorial it may help you a lot.

[Foamy.]

Meh, it's not just that I like to be VERY minimalistic, so I believe text kills it.
I've tried text, it's just not my thing.

[MarkPancake]

Wheres the stock from ?

[trend]

text adds a whole other dimension to a sig if its done properly...don't give up just because you think it makes it look bad....by making the text look good you make the sig look better