splintercell

[Fondzy]

hello
new sig:



Cnc

Grtz

[MarkPancake]

It's nice effects and stuff but what the hell is the render? We can hardly see it, needs less dark and more light.

[Fuzer]

this would be 10/10 for me if you changed the font you used for your name.

[Papa]

yeah dude, the renders a tad dark. i can hardly see it. i really recommend brightening it up or something.
Secondly, the coloring on this is a tad off. it's flat green. it looks extremely monotone. try and mix it up a bit, toss a yellow in there! make it looks toxic or something cool.

Not bad effects, and the lighting is cool just make it brighter.

font is decent IMO i think it works okay, however fuzer hit the nail on the head with your name. This is not swirly cutesy font time. This is a badass mission, this guy is possibly going to die. make this seem grave and intense.