SOTW Desire to go Fast

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[Ptka]

Not sure about this one.
I don't really know what the render is, to be honest.
The text just doesn't work for me, it's way to much, and all you needed was a simple font.
The effects used as backgrounds aren't great either.
You need to look at this one from far away and you'll see that the render blends in way too much with the background.
Good attempt, just needs refining.

[BFMV]

I think the render is Speed Racer ^^ but yeah it does blend in WAY too much I actually thought it was a race track at first, because of the title of the thread :/

[Fuzer]

to me its obvious what it is, i noticed it right away, its an F1 car. i like it overall however i really dont think the text fits well. a different choice of font and just the positioning would do the trick imo

[Stiggeh]

The render is Jenson Button in the Brawn GP F1 car. :P

Too busy for my liking. Try keep your text short and snappy because you have to put a lot more effort in to make lots of text look good. I don't think the placement of the render helps either because the full render includes things like the tyres, front wing, etc. maybe try showing the car a bit more?

Sorry, I'm not too good at criticising.

[BFMV]

Fuzer, you can't say that if you just looked at the thread title and glanced at the car (not including the helmet) that it looks like a race track, but with a view like from the sky... Ok back ontopic for me the text would be better if it was moved and I like the color switches in the text, I don't know if there's a fancy word for that but I like it. :P

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it is Jenson Button..thanks for the replies