Control and Desire - wip

[MarkPancake]

Is it a suitable name for it? Meh Loss of Control perhaps.. anyways C&C it's still a wip but I'm running outta ideas. Please help!

[Linda]

rly nice
i will get owned on battle hihihi ....

[MarkPancake]

Most likely won't use this as my entry. Running outta ideas! :S

[Stiggeh]

Nice C4D work. Smudging isn't doing it for me - seems a bit lazy. The left side is great at the moment but you really need to work on the right side to bring it out. Other than that, freaky naughty.

[MarkPancake]

Yea my exact thoughts Stig :S The smudging was generally to merge the two stocks and give it a nice BG for other effects, although I just got some smexy ideas like a split second into reading this.

[Chris]

Those clouds look a bit bright and light to fit the left side. Maybe kill the contrast a bit, that might bring the focal point out a little more. I was kind of confused about which side to look at first. The bright clouds kind of take away from the face.

[MarkPancake]

I'll be filling in the right side with more C4D work, got it in my head now. Thanks for the comments

[Ptka]

It's WIP so you know it needs more.
I think you need to fix up the effect a bit.
It looks a bit overdone.
I also don't like the colours, make them more vibrant. :P