This is pain =]

[dave9339]

hey guys new sig comment plz

[Fuzer]

Imo this would have been so much better if you hadnt used a soft black brush on softlight =/ + some of the effects look a little oversharpened, and the background it blurry! =[ text and lighting are both nice though

[Phayze]

Seems a bit chaotic. My eyes are going everywhere and not just centered on one defined focal. Also, it seems a bit overcontrasted. May be just me though. The text looks good though. Nice font choice.