Halo signature

[iNova]

I think i'm finally getting the hang of lighting.
V1:
V2(Reworked The Bright Side Of His Shoulder):

[Scrib]

lighting is very close to perfect i think it too bright on his right shoulder although the text i soooo killing this piece . change it. gj tho m8 keep it up

[Phayze]

Very cool. I really like this. Great job with the lighting, looks really good. This tag actually looks pretty cool in just one color. As iScribble said, take out the text.

Well done.

[iNova]

bump

[MarkPancake]

That lighting is perfect. Period.

[Scrib]

awsome nice to see a fellow scot doing well

[Zepzune]

Great Lighting! It's really good around his shoulder, I'm so jealous. Haha, keep up the great work.

[iNova]

Thanks for the CnC Guys.

awsome nice to see a fellow scot doing well

I don't usually see scots at all. :P

[Garis]

yeah. it really nice.
light is going well
but sig is very monotone/. thats sad
and no text.
but you doing well

[Kanariya]

Has the potential to be a fantastic sig.
Render is well blended, nice effects and it's great quality. Colours and composition are nice too.

I would suggest cropping the sig as this would look GREAT smaller, at least 1/3 off from the bottom. And work on the text because it's really letting the signature down.