Freddy

[Dr D-Mento]

Trying to decide which one I like better... Second one is a bit darker than the first.... Thinking about possibly adding "Sweet Dreams" somewhere on it...

Thoughts?

Thanks,
Dr D




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Credit to: Bob_Magic for the C4D's (they're from his Halo3 tut)

[Kanariya]

Could use some text, too much light from the left - very distracting.

[navb01]

needs text and the face is a little bit oversmudged!

looks pretty good though!

[NoFeaR]

maybe the c4d or flow cud be parallel to his fingers. and it will be nicer. keep the rythm nice work.

[tekken]

try working on the lighting, you have to manny light sources
away from the render when its the one you want to light up.
i like the render placement.

[Helix]

huge negative spot in the middle.. soften it up a bit

[Dr D-Mento]

Thanks all, for the comments. I will work on this later today! I appreciate the help, as I am still trying to into this stuff!!!...