Unbreakable

[Mishe]

[ratchetnclank]

Okay.

The effects are pretty nice, simple but nice. The text doesn't fit, white and fonts don't work, neither does the dots. The colours are alright but looking quite dull. The whole thing is over contrasted, if you can sort out the colours and contrast then this would be great

[Proflax]

hm, I actually like the colors Only the text bothers me :-)

[Hind]

It's a little too dark for my liking. Effects are good, and like the others said, you should do something about that text.