Alba Pure Beauty Sign

[cc.RadillacVIII]

My first sign with a real person for a long time. Some people thinks im doing too much anime and that its all done before.

So here it is!

Version 1

Version 2



Version 3



Version 4

[Cwizo]

Real nice man^^ cant find any thing to complane about

ps. i suck on english Ds.

[Fuzer]

The text kills this imo. Also im not fond of how small youve resized alba too. effects are nice, but the dont go with the background, maybe change the colour of the background to a greenish?

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Thanks for opening my eyes

It's always easier to see the bad things when a person points them out.

Version 2's up now ^u^

[Fuzer]

Deffinatly better, but im still not feeling the font your using dude, either that, or take it off bold, make the two words on different text layers and center the "pure" word over the "beauty" word, just a thought

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Yeah, text isn't my thing. They always kill my works :/

Version 3 now then ^u^

[ratchetnclank]

The colours need work as does the depth. Everything is a bit sharp atm.

[cc.RadillacVIII]

C'mon tell me little more specific

[Immortal.]

looks nice man.
love the choice of render.
wanna hook me up?

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Hook you up.... Im not in to guys ^u^