Captain america

[Dr D-Mento]

loosely followed RnC's Prince of Persia tut... what do you think....

v1:


v2:


So there's v2. Added a border, changed the color, added source and made it not so blurry (hopefully) what do y'all think?


v3:


So I finally had some free time. Changed the font, and softened the right side, what do you think?

[cc.RadillacVIII]

A bit to blurry, needs some sharpen. The color, purple, nja dos not fit so well. Maby go with blue, like the captains color.

The background is flat, blurry and empty. Light source needed.

The text is pretty bad, cant see it so well.

Overall needs something who makes it come alive, some depth.

You have something good to work on now

[Hind]

Render looks a little LQ, the whole thing looks a bit dark, and text is pretty bad. Your choice of colour isn't that good either imo.

So, in a nutshell, get better quality render or sharpen it to make it look better, read Papa's text tut, and add a light source.

[cheesy GFX]

text is the main fault in the tag, it's got a decent flow so not too bad. Add a light source :P Hope to see a version 2

[Dr D-Mento]

bump?

[tekken]

work on effects, some of your C4D/Fractals arent flowing with the render.

[cheesy GFX]

version 2 is so much better, colours are much more refreshing and the sharpen makes it stand out a lot more. Good job.

[Linda]

v2 love the collors
nice work, but text is bad

[cc.RadillacVIII]

Yeah much better color and effects.

The right sides effects stands out to much and are to sharp, should be as soft and nice as the left side

Text is as bad as before. Another font, color and placement should do it.

Looking forward to v3 ^u^

[Dom]

Version 2 is a lot better, I love it, colours are amazing, effects are good but the text isn't as good as it could be. Stick to simple/default fonts!