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    Default OKAMI PLEASE COMMENT

    ok



    tried for the first time in a while not experimenting and doing what i love doing in a tag

    CnC is much appreciated.

    Thanks,

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    Too much black imo, effects seem really LQ aswell. Don't like the text as I hate rotated text.

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    It looks really grainy to me, did you set alot of the effects to colour dodge? =/ Imo screen works alot better for c4d's/effects. Other than that, im not too fond of the text, its not so much the font you used, its where you placed it. The blending is okay and some fairly decent smudge work, if thats what it is. Overall, i like it but it could be improved by changing some of the layer blending.

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    woy! lets see who's Okami sig is better XD
    We both got the same render

    btw urs is over sharpened and the cloning is not done properly.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Splinter. View Post
    Too much black imo, effects seem really LQ aswell. Don't like the text as I hate rotated text.
    splint maybe tell him some things on how to improve it or whats good eh? rather than whats bad about the tag.


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    How can I say how to get rid of black and how to stop LQ? It's simple. Blur and sharpen, more effects or expand on the current effects. It's not whats bad, it's what needed fixing. I'm sure Scribble knows how to fix those things by himself.

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    Not to badd scrib not too bad.
    First thing that hti me when i looked at this tag it was like ohhh, compo. There is like no compo its smack in the middle bro. Move that off to the side a bit make ita bit mroe interesting.

    Effects are okay, i think they are sharpened a bit too much. The msudging in the BG is cool, but i'm getting a bit bored of the whole, light smudging coming from the middle of the render look. it really gives no realism to the lighting of the sig no matter what you do (unless its a silhoutte).

    The text is okay. I think in this tag i might have done without the gray it doesnt seem to fit so well. maybe stick a lighting white in there or something.

    The effects again are good, but the bottom where you blended him with the white, not so good. It looks rly weird and out of nowehere. try to blend him with more effects rather than random white brushes.

    overll solid. work on it a bit more though.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Splinter. View Post
    How can I say how to get rid of black and how to stop LQ? It's simple. Blur and sharpen, more effects or expand on the current effects. It's not whats bad, it's what needed fixing. I'm sure Scribble knows how to fix those things by himself.
    splint you missed a key point in my post.

    splint maybe tell him some things on how to improve it or whats good eh? rather than whats bad about the tag.

    if you cant find atleats one thing good in each tag you definitely aren't working hard enough. And if you say that by doing that it's sugar coating it, please talk to me on msn so we can discuss it. otherwise lets leave scribbles thread be.


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    lol splinter PAPA's serious, coz he never posts this much in a single thread
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    lol thx for the comments all:P it was better than tv lol

    http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/s...edversionc.png

    version 2 where i messed about with crap, i don't like it myself but i thought i would post it.

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