SOTW

[Hind]

V2-



C&C please
Updated!

[Taff]

First I would say to be honest. Very nice pal =D

[Hind]

Why, thank you!

[MarkPancake]

Uhhm, I don't mean to be horrible but it looks like some text, rotated on a background. I like the texture of the background alot but the text seems untouched and really plain. I'd work on doing stuff to it :S

[Garis]

russian ftw
srift and tekst

[SSSSK]

nice simple rustic effective powerful, but i think when people think of tyopography they never think outside the box. You are close to breaking this thought. try even making even more abstract pieces

[KidBuu]

its good the v1. i like it

[Ptka]

The first is by far the best, I would work on developing it more.
Go farther with it, it looks great for now, but I think you could make it more 3D by adding some lighting and shadows.
You could also crop it a bit, it's very large around the edges and the blank space makes me not focus on the text so much.
Other than that, it's quite interesting and I like your choice of language other than English.

[navb01]

first one is way better, work on the text a bit and it will be great, bg is very cool!

[Hind]

Thanks guys, I'll try adding more to it, and then I'll post a V2!