Paranoia

[spydannja]

C&C

[tekken]

work on colours and blending.
i think the dark BG goes with what you where thinking about (i can read minds).
expand your effects a bit so its not too empty.

[Lewk]

add a textured background, flare it up a bit

mask around the edges of the render and bring the waveyness to the front

[KidBuu]

just work on blending some more. add some more fading effects

[Ptka]

Work on the blending and the background.
Effects are great, but as KidBuu said, try some sort of shattering or fading effect.