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    Default first b&w


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    Sorry dude, but the text iss horrible.Keep it small and simple for thos kind of signatures. And drop that black line, especially with drop shadow.

    But apart from that, i think it could need more contrast.

    Nice job

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    Gotcha, will update later.

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    Too much pentool?
    Imo.


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    Updated, simpler text:

    Probably did overdue it a bit with the pen tool, it was the first time I had gotten it to look halfway decent, got a little excited xD

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    Hmm, move the text off the render, and resize the YNK bit, make it a little smaller. Much better tho

    Oh well, thats my oppinion at least. If you think it looks good, go for it
    Last edited by cC.Aleksander; 05-09-2009 at 05:56 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by silentshadow View Post
    Hmm, move the text off the render, and resize the YNK bit, make it a little smaller. Much better tho

    Oh well, thats my oppinion at least. If you think it looks good, go for it
    ofc, I appreciate your opinion, still fairly new at this and ill take all the input I can get.

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    Great job, loving the effects and I'm glad it's in black and white.
    Text still isn't right, try making it grey, to match the sig a bit more, other than that, it's very nice.
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    It looks too big imo

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