Venom

[XpoZuRe]

Just tell me what you think

[xFaTaL_SwiTchx]

A little too monotone

[Ptka]

Agree with Fatal Switch, it's all the exact same colour.
I love the effect you have, of him just popping out, but I think the render could have been better, and the background/foreground could have been much darker. Try to get some depth by sharpening the focal, and blurring the background.

[XpoZuRe]

tryed everyting u said Ptka. Better?

[GreyCub]

I like that one alot more, the coulours come out more, and your drawn to render... Good Job!

[.Innovation]

Your second version is alot better. Nice effects, keep up the good work

[Dom]

Second one is looking a lot better. Keep it up!