Funky DL

[Jool]

Constructive criticism would be appreciated.

[Ptka]

Nice, I like it a lot, the only thing that bothers me is the red outline around him looks a bit off.
Maybe try making it thicker, so that it's much more bold, instead of a squiggled line.
Nice job on the brushing.

[Jool]

Alright, thanks for the tip.

[Papa]

nice jool, i like the simplicity of it. TBH the red shapes are cool, and i like the gray, but it seems a bit too minimalistic. i'd like to see a bit more going on in this.
Also im not rly a fan of the border and the line around his head.
The text is rly good though good job on that.