Yet another X-Men Origins.. --''

[GreyCub]

Yeah you've seen them all before... But I made this for a friend, what do you think?

[Ptka]

Pretty good effects, but I don't like the duplicate render.
It's a little bright where his claw is, and it's also a fake light source.
Text could use some work, maybe see if you can find a sort of "slash" text?

[Dom]

Yeah, I agree with what Ptka said, the text needs work as it's too big and stands out too much, I don't like the duplicate render and is very bright at the end of his claws. Tweek those and post a version 2!

[Ballinfolyf131]

on the right shoulder (the renders left) it looks like you might have accidentally erased a little bit.