Final Fantasy

[Muffun]

[MarkPancake]

Looks over burnt and topazed to me. Effects are cool but if I were you 'd take off the topaz, remove the burn layers or burn some areas of the background too to give the effect of lighting. Also take off the sharpens. Effects are ok but the splatters are really focal grabbing and out of place. Take some burn off the left side too.

[Muffun]

I dont use topaz.

[MarkPancake]

Then the stocks topazed. just exclude my topaz comment from the rest then. Rest still applies.

[Muffun]

Okay but this is the tut i followed.

http://ichigo7749.deviantart.com/art...orial-70038019