Its Not Working

[Miril]

C&C ish welcome, hope its not terrible but w/e

[MarkPancake]

Texture is nice, but please never use this stock again, it's so overused . I'd say remove text entirely, it doesn't fit the piece. Maybe try cropping the left side off of this and flipping canvas.

[Miril]

Bah text hah.. flipped and deleted text. I had never used that stock before, and I know its overused, just thought I'd give it a go

[Ptka]

Looks much better the other way for some reason.
And it should have some text, just different from what you had before.
Good effects, and good use of them with the stock. :P

[Miril]

Hmm... I can't really figure out a good spot for text, but I gave it another shot...

[MarkPancake]

Definately no text. Not everything needs text just remember that.

[Miril]

I was just following Ptka's advice, I didn't intend to put text on v2, but Ptka said slap some text on er'

[Ptka]

I just prefer text, it seems unfinished sometimes when there is no text on it.
It's up to YOU Miril, me nor Splinter can tell you if text is better or not.