Sweetie

[MrGreitis]

Hello everyone

Uploading my first piece of work for this forum



CnC are welcome

p.s. I'm not so sure about the text though... any advice is welcome

[Garis]

About text.
I prefer to keep it straight.
Dont use any shit like warp or transformations..
Plus, I think its too far from focal.
BG is interesting, but I think you need to remove all those shiny dots..
They are all over the focal - keep focal clean
Also black stuff in right side of the BG kills the sig...

Be active and you'll improve very soon

P.S it should be in Signatures and avatars section

[ratchetnclank]

I take it you used the Starlight tutorial? Looks like you did.

I agree with garis the text should be straight and closer to the render.

It's nice apart from that just a bit overcontrasted.

[Fur]

remove some of the pink stars from the girls face and head area dont relaly like how they look and I would just try and blend it a little more just a little. Also the light source is very off lamost need to switch the text and the giant light thing in the bg and it would be pretty good. The text needs work to., but overall its nice I like it keep up the work.

[ccdreadcc]

maybe the girl layer comes after the pink star layer?
but good finish :P

[Dom]

I love this render, have seen it in so many pieces of work. Pretty decent tag but I would change the text. Keep it up.