Sundae

[Ritz]

Trying to keep up with this washed out style



text is def. a WIP.

[マーティン]

Overall, it's medium.
I'm not fond of the text and the pentooling.
The text doesn't blend in with the sig, plus it's almost unreadable.
The pentooling isn't that bad, but the color of it doesn't blend it.
I love the effects you did, though the lightning isn't the best.
The depth is kinda weird.
And the girls' face doesn't match her body somehow.
6/10.

[Ritz]

Text definitely needs work, I know that. Always been my weakest point. Next time I work on blending it .

Thanks for the CnC. Its much appreciated.

[Ptka]

6/10.

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