New Sig - Dancer

[Oo_Alias_oO]

This is a completly different stlye for me so I thought i'd give it a bash.
I like it, but I know it can be improved as there is just something missing I reckon.

Not sure what though?

Alias,

[Garis]

AMAZING..
looks really hot.. sexy.
the only thing-text could be improved..
overall, your best.

[Oo_Alias_oO]

Thanks boss, any tips on the text? I usually just keep it smaller and black/white as I fail with text :P

[Garis]

Thanks boss, any tips on the text? I usually just keep it smaller and black/white as I fail with text :P

I don't know..
read Papa's text tutorial, look up for texts in other signatures,..
I think they can help you

[funn]

everything is gr8 nice sig buddy try to place the text on her hand rotate it place it in the direction where her hand is going in this way " / " where she is looking

[DoubleForte]

Great work, only thing I'd suggest is reading Papa's text tutorial, like Garis says.

[Oo_Alias_oO]

Had a bash at chaging where the text is...



Just I dont think the gradient on it looks too good...

[Scrib]

try adding a garamound 6pt where that text is just now and apply image then clipping mask

[Dron]

updated text looks much much better, i would lower opacity just a little, cos its a bit too vivid now imo

[Ptka]

Looks pretty good, a lot of splatters though, a bit distracting.
Other than that, it's not bad, do what Dron said and lower the text opacity a bit.