new spiderman sig please C/C

[RussiA]

hey pplz havn't made a sig for a few weeks now been working and playing the new zombies on cod5 lol well here we go i tried a lot of effects here and i hope the render was a correct choice i didn't have a lot of ideas for renders so i used spiderman well i appreaciate any c/c and rates thnx guys and i think i need to fix the text again i can't get the text correct yet so i'm looking at text tuts

[DoubleForte]

Uhmm... FAR too dark, can barely make out the render, the effects are way too dark and flat, oversaturated to hell too. Text is nearly invisible and needs work. Almost looks like oily fingerprints in the background but that might be me.

[Chidori.]

No it's the pic. I was wondering about that too. ^.^

I can see the render, it's just that you changed the color from red to barely visible...

BG is weird but if that's what your going for, Good. The blue c4d or whatever covers up the face. Text needs work. I can see it but it looks mispalced for me.

[RussiA]

so you think i should of used the original red and blue? instead of changing it?

[Chidori.]

Yes. But adding a few granite maps wouldn't hurt. And it won't damage the color.

[Karter]

The overall signature is very very dark. You don't want to put effects over the render. The render should be the main focal point. This signature has a focal point, but the render isn't clear. You should work on improving the effects quality, as they are a little bland as is.

As for the text. Try taking this tutorial. It definitely helped me out a lot with my text.
http://jpapa.deviantart.com/art/SIgn...orial-91177085

[RussiA]

cheers for the c/c i'll try and make another one and fix it up with the advice XD

[turok5011]

i agree with DF..its way to dark...and the text needs work too. idk if this will work..but try a black and white gradient map...and set it to screen and repost it.

[KidBuu]

etoo, u better follow some good tuts, this is plain rubbish, no u have full authority to change the coolor of the render it doesnt matter, but try to be more realistic there, u cant simply change the renders color by adding effects andthat too in Differnce or Exclusion mode>.<

the rest is what others said
Try and make the render visible even though if ur bg is dark as hell.
Follow tuts here and u will evolve,
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