Joker

[turok5011]

first time using the pen tool. I think i did pretty good. please tell me what you think!

[Ptka]

I actually think this would be much better without the pen tool.
The C4D's are really well placed and the depth is great.
Just remove the pen tool.

[GreyCub]

I agree with PTKA, but having said that, the Pen tool is created correctly, it just doesnt go well here.

[Dom]

The pen tooling doesn't work, as already said it has been done correctly and you've done it well but it just doesn't suit this piece. I also think the some of the C4D's need to be erased or lowered on the opacity as it's very busy. My opinion.

[Valkyr]

i like it but u shoulda added the pentool as a outer glow effect--- duplicate screen gaugasian blur

[Karter]

Some of the effects on the bottom are a little too sharp. And the lighting is off. Also, if you are going to keep the pen tool, I would remove that very top pen tool line that goes around his head.