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    oh its been a long time since i started a thread in this section, thought might just burn this up, call me a noob idc but i think i made a decent "reality sig" <--------poor at making sig from real stocks. Definately CNC
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    Bu, man. This isn't your best. COmpo is great i'll give ya that. The compo is very well placed and makes for a pretty decent flow. The left side is EVERYWHERE though. I mean the left is a bit messy and the swirls arent rly helping to minimize it at all. I'd take it and delete some of the stuff on the left a bit, get it going minimalistic again so the flow heads more towards the focal.
    The coloring is decent. maybe make that like an off gray or something rather than the yellow it just looks a little odd. But getting rid of that square will help it a lot.

    Overall it needs work. i think your just a bit rusty. Not to bad though.
    Your biggest problem though is the text. It's rly rusty. Chop off that block it rly isnt helping at all. And also the font of the SENSATION


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    No stop... :P

    I really like what you've done there... Mabey a single or two things may have been better, but it looks really good Keep up the great work!

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    ah i will do what u say papa
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    the left isde is lovely.
    the right side however is chaotic.
    the swirls are a bit exaggerated:P
    nice work.
    keep at it buddy.






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    Quote Originally Posted by Immortal. View Post
    the left isde is lovely.
    the right side however is chaotic.
    the swirls are a bit exaggerated:P
    nice work.
    keep at it buddy.
    I think you mean the left side is chaotic? :P

    But yeah, the swirls could be more controlled, try only one swirl just in a spiral pattern instead of random waves of them.
    Nice job on the colours, looks good.
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    Found it! I really agree with all of the above C&C, left side needs work, but the right is good... Papa really kills it when he C&C's, there's nothing left
    All I can say is listen to Papa, he knows what he's talking about...

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