Far Cry 2

[Karter]

Got stuck on text. I don't know about it. I don't think it looks terrible, but it isn't perfect.

Only difference, is the bottom one has a border.

[Active.]

Firstly i prefer without the border. Try moving the text lower down near the hand and rotate it so its pointing parallel with the gun. Overall the sig is nice. BG is very good looking, and the splatters are neat. However, I think the render looks a bit oversaturated, idk looks a bit off.
Nice work though!

[Takken]

The flow is somewhat disrupted. The depth as well. Love the colours you used and the blending is pretty nice. The text... Bleh, it passes:P.

[Jeff]

Just move the text straight down, so that it lines up with his mouth. You could have it go behind the guy so that his hand covers the bottom half of some text. Prefer without a border, though the bottom one's text looks way better because of its sharpness. Nice job though.

[Papa]

Good tag karter! The first thing i notice though is text palcement. For sure i agree with jeff. DEF move it down by his hands. Right now its wayy to distracting and ruins the focal point (his face).
The BG and effects are cool. Looks liek the apocolypse. And hes just liek a badass walking through it all. Good colors they match up well and lighting isnt bad either.

I agree drop the border and sharpen the etxt in the top on like you did to the second. nice usage of c4d and very good font choice. You did a smash job on that text.

[Karter]

Updated version at the top.

[Ptka]

Nice work.
Awesome background and Papa is totally right about walking through an apocalypse.
Text isn't bad as well either although I would still move it down more, maybe even behind the render's hand.

[ZonariAn]

Farcry 2 is awesome, and I'm diggin this sig, nice!