Warbreak

[Jool]

I'm trying out a new style here, so please tell me what I need to add/improve on.

Here's the second version:

Also, here's the stock that I used to make this: http://tinypic.com/r/vnf0ab/5

[Ascarine]

Needs more depth, and a defined focal. I would blur the background, increase the light source and do some dodging on the main character. Seems to be lacking in effects and flow but i quite like the simplicity. But again it seems sloppy

[Takken]

I love the stock you used but the sig needs more depth!

[SSSSK]

it looked like you just topazed and aded lighting and text. add more substance and make use of the flow

[Jool]

it looked like you just topazed and aded lighting and text. add more substance and make use of the flow

Lol, the funny thing is, that's exactly what I did.


Anyway, thanks for the tips and suggestions.

[Jool]

Needs more depth, and a defined focal. I would blur the background, increase the light source and do some dodging on the main character. Seems to be lacking in effects and flow but i quite like the simplicity. But again it seems sloppy

I actually did do some minimal dodging on the main character, and I don't see how something simplistic can seem "sloppy".