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[iNova]

Cnc please..

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First thing that pops into my mind....

Homosexual.

Other than that. Pretty good. Don't like the random text symbols though.

[MarkPancake]

The C4Ds are horrible imo. That low opacity one is ewwy :S You've overdone the lighting too. The low opacity C4D doesn't reflect darkness, should've done an adjustment layer for that. Not feeling this at all man, really messy and yucky imo.

[ratchetnclank]

Don't lower opacity on c4d's if you set them to screen, they end up half see through and look like crap.

The effects on the left seem a bit much, get rid of some of it and remove the c4d on the right and this will b decent.