Soul Calibur IV - Talim

[ZonariAn]

I did one this time using a different tutorial. I tried to add more depth by having a C4D Come infront of her, and under her arm. This is the first time I've tried to use abstract/effect C4Ds







C n C plz! because of you guys, my skills are improving more and more each day!

[Fuzer]

You are deffinatly improving. the depth in this one is quite nice, i prefer version 3 personally, however its a little chaotic for my tastes

[Jeff]

Yeah, that's a great improvement. It is a bit chaotic - keep in mind that you don't want to take too much attention away from your focal point - everything should work with it. A lot of it does work with it here, but I think there is a little too much going on. If you do have too much, the easiest thing to do is to just take the eraser and get rid of parts you don't need. I think a mix of the second and third version is best. I like the coloring in the second one, but it seems a little too dominant. If it was less emphasized but still present it would look pretty nice.

[Hotdog393]

Yer Ver3 the best imo. But as stated before from Jeff and Fuzer just to chaotic but some ppl like that

[ZonariAn]

I was worried about it being too chaotic. I tried to do some black brushing around the edge to draw the focus towards the center. I can see a huge difference between when I follow a tutorial, and when I try to do something from scratch. I don't have enough knowledge yet, I think.

[ZonariAn]

It doesn't seem as noticeable of a change, but I went in and erased a bunch of the background C4D. Hopefully it's less chaotic.

[Jool]

I personally like the third one the most.

It seems a lot more vibrant.

[thg.koza]

i love the version 3..IMO ^^
for me, just blurred it more at the right side of the focal to make more depth.
and tried to darken some areas. .

[ZonariAn]

Version 3 eh? I think you guys are right. It is more vibrant. So I should just blur/darken the sides more?